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Scion
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My fluffScion 08-26-2009

Heres my fluff so far peeps. In case you wanted a look. Please C&C would be much appreciated, wad ya think??


Dwarven Battle-cry: The King, The Throne, My Hold, My Brother, My sister, My Mother, My Father, My  Grandpa on my mothers side, My  Grandma on my mothers side, My Grandpa on my fathers side .........

No wonder dwarves are becoming extinct!!

08-26-2009 01:19 PM
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Scion
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RE: My fluffScion 08-28-2009

Come on 8 people have downloaded at and still no comments. I'm dying here Sad.


Dwarven Battle-cry: The King, The Throne, My Hold, My Brother, My sister, My Mother, My Father, My  Grandpa on my mothers side, My  Grandma on my mothers side, My Grandpa on my fathers side .........

No wonder dwarves are becoming extinct!!

08-28-2009 04:08 AM
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Thommy H
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RE: My fluffThommy H 08-28-2009

Seems okay, but as an amateur writer with a literature degree you probably don't want me to go into too much detail about how to improve it.

The content itself is fine - as valid as any other interpretation of Chaos Dwarfs, given that the official background is so sparse.


Serial Writist - lots and lots of short fiction, written by me, regularly updated.

My models:
The Legion of Astragoth | The Dark Crusade of Mousillon | The Destroyer Cult | Les Défenseurs du Béniterre | Storm Over Béniterre | Force Belial

My rules:
Chaos Dwarfs Warscroll Compendium


08-28-2009 04:47 AM
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Scion
Chaos Dwarf Hero
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Posts: 213 - Mar 2009
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RE: My fluffScion 08-28-2009

Go on  give me the detail, I want it to be as proffesional as I can make it.


Dwarven Battle-cry: The King, The Throne, My Hold, My Brother, My sister, My Mother, My Father, My  Grandpa on my mothers side, My  Grandma on my mothers side, My Grandpa on my fathers side .........

No wonder dwarves are becoming extinct!!

08-28-2009 10:30 AM
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